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05-08-2016, 08:27 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-09-2016, 03:15 AM by Shiroi Kurēn.)
Hello everyone,
I have been playing with haiku lately - trying to tell a story in three stanzas while keeping the integrity of the format. Today, being Mother's Day, had me thinking about the most important woman in my life - all our lives. So without further ado here is my work in her honour. 
She will always be,
The first to offer her hand,
Trusted graceful guide.
A bond unspoken,
From your first breath to her last,
A friend to the end.
Her love keeps you warm,
Whether near or far apart,
Like only mum can.
Happy Mother's Day everyone, hug your mothers tightly! I hope you enjoy my little offering! 
~ SK ~
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I did it shiro...I did it several times this weekend
and I was also hugged by my kids, LOVED every single one...
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY
To be simple is to be great
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05-08-2016, 03:40 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-08-2016, 03:41 PM by W1LL.)
Nice Little piece there Shiro 
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(05-08-2016, 03:28 PM)Fenix-TS Wrote: I did it shiro...I did it several times this weekend
and I was also hugged by my kids, LOVED every single one...
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY
Same here Fenix, even cooked up a nice meal for her! 
(05-08-2016, 03:40 PM)W1LL Wrote: Nice Little piece there Shiro
Thank you W1LL, glad you enjoyed it!
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(05-08-2016, 08:27 AM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote: Hello everyone,
I have been playing with haiku lately - trying to tell a story in three stanzas while keeping the integrity of the format. Today, being Mother's Day, had me thinking about the most important woman in my life - all our lives. So without further ado here is my work in her honour.
She will always be,
The first to offer her hand,
Trusted graceful guide.
A bond unspoken,
From your first breath to her last,
A friend to the end.
Her love keeps you warm,
Whether near or far apart,
Like only mum can.
Happy Mother's Day everyone, hug your mothers tightly! I hope you enjoy my little offering!
~ SK ~
Ahhhhhh Shiroi Kuren! *sighs* You touch my heart , you truly do.
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Hi Shiroi, great poem...Your mother, my mother, ALL MOTHERS, deserve it, and more, MUCH, MUCH MORE!
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05-29-2016, 07:01 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-09-2016, 01:13 AM by Seiryu.)
I happened upon this piece tonight at exactly the right time. It warmed my heart and comforted when I needed it the most. It's funny how fate works that way. Thank you for this.
~ Seiryu ~
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