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Mother - Shiroi Kurēn - 05-08-2016
Hello everyone,
I have been playing with haiku lately - trying to tell a story in three stanzas while keeping the integrity of the format. Today, being Mother's Day, had me thinking about the most important woman in my life - all our lives. So without further ado here is my work in her honour.
She will always be,
The first to offer her hand,
Trusted graceful guide.
A bond unspoken,
From your first breath to her last,
A friend to the end.
Her love keeps you warm,
Whether near or far apart,
Like only mum can.
Like only mum can.
Happy Mother's Day everyone, hug your mothers tightly! I hope you enjoy my little offering!
~
SK ~
RE: Mother - Willy_for_Boobies - 05-08-2016
.....Niice.....
RE: Mother - Simple Tania - 05-08-2016
I did it shiro...I did it several times this weekend
and I was also hugged by my kids, LOVED every single one...
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY
RE: Mother - W1LL - 05-08-2016
Nice Little piece there Shiro
RE: Mother - Shiroi Kurēn - 05-08-2016
(05-08-2016, 03:28 PM)Fenix-TS Wrote: I did it shiro...I did it several times this weekend
and I was also hugged by my kids, LOVED every single one...
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY
Same here Fenix, even cooked up a nice meal for her!
(05-08-2016, 03:40 PM)W1LL Wrote: Nice Little piece there Shiro
Thank you W1LL, glad you enjoyed it!
RE: Mother - Anallee - 05-08-2016
(05-08-2016, 08:27 AM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote: Hello everyone,
I have been playing with haiku lately - trying to tell a story in three stanzas while keeping the integrity of the format. Today, being Mother's Day, had me thinking about the most important woman in my life - all our lives. So without further ado here is my work in her honour.
She will always be,The first to offer her hand,Trusted graceful guide.
A bond unspoken,From your first breath to her last,A friend to the end.
Her love keeps you warm,Whether near or far apart,Like only mum can.
Happy Mother's Day everyone, hug your mothers tightly! I hope you enjoy my little offering!
~
Ahhhhhh Shiroi Kuren! *sighs* You touch my heart
, you truly do. ~
A ~
RE: Mother - Shiroi Kurēn - 05-08-2016
(05-08-2016, 07:57 PM)Anallee Wrote: Ahhhhhh Shiroi Kuren! *sighs* You touch my heart
~
Thank you so much Ana, you're always so kind and thoughtful!
RE: Mother - Anallee - 05-08-2016
(05-08-2016, 11:31 PM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote:(05-08-2016, 07:57 PM)Anallee Wrote: Ahhhhhh Shiroi Kuren! *sighs* You touch my heart
~
Thank you so much Ana, you're always so kind and thoughtful!
So easy to do with special one(s)
, and my best effort with the rest. ~
Anallee
RE: Mother - Tantrum - 05-09-2016
Hi Shiroi, great poem...Your mother, my mother, ALL MOTHERS, deserve it, and more, MUCH, MUCH MORE!
RE: Mother - Seiryu - 05-29-2016
I happened upon this piece tonight at exactly the right time. It warmed my heart and comforted when I needed it the most. It's funny how fate works that way. Thank you for this.
~
Seiryu ~