Earthquake

[brandon1op]

.   Her love is like an Earthquake

Powerful and uncontrolled

When she wants me I turn my head

but when I want her shes with him instead

Our love is like a Earthquake 

Dangerous and Merciless

Straight to the heart and the point

She makes me hunger for more with Every Rumble

There Love is an Earthquake

Wonderful and Free

I am free now away from the danger

I am a Cloud above all else

This is my first poem on here and its not about anybody In particuler "hides from the pitchforks"

[Sharp]

I like it; it captures a part of how I've been feeling the past few weeks.

Welcome to the Poetry Club, Brandon!

[Lexirific]

lovely poem, Brandorino

[Altaria]

That's a nice piece

[brandon1op]

THEY LIKE ME..THEY REALLY LIKE ME

[Simple Tania]

Yes They Did Brandon, and so do I! I like it very much!

[Cuylie]

I think my favorite line is "When she wants me I turn my head / but when I want her she's with him instead". The yearning in that statement is powerful and the rhyme couples them really well together, lending strength to the emotions that are portrayed.

[Lacivious]

*hangs around with a pitchfork* Hey? I liked it... but i brought it just in case what can i say?

[Jackhole]

Nice it's very espressive