The clear canvas

[RP_RICK]

I just met you
And I feel lost in my mind
The place and the sharing,
the spark and yearning

I just met you
And I dont know what to do
My eyes into your blue
And this smile so true

I just met you
And I just feel so close
No sense to this feeling
Yet so true and telling

I just met you
And so much to discover
Your scars, your body, your soul
All that white to be brought whole

I just met you
And I have to let you go...

[Altaria]

Hey Rick. Wow, what can I say? Nice piece you got there


Um abraço aqui da amiga eheh

[RP_RICK]

(07-14-2016, 08:20 PM)Altaria Wrote: Hey Rick. Wow, what can I say? Nice piece you got there


Um abraço aqui da amiga eheh

Hehehe thank you
Glad you liked it

A pastel de nata for you

[Ghostrider65]

Wow my friend, Excellent! Very deep and moving.

[Cath]

Does it come from a real life experience?

[_Barbie_]

Very well done, it shows emotion behind it and that can only mean one thing...

*snuggles*

[TayYay]

Wow!! sheer class of words and perfect weighted selection! i dont know what i am saying but kuddos bro for giving such a literary excerpt

[GuyByThePond]

Look who's the poet  

I liked it friend