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The clear canvas - RP_RICK - 07-14-2016

I just met you
And I feel lost in my mind
The place and the sharing,
the spark and yearning

I just met you
And I dont know what to do
My eyes into your blue
And this smile so true

I just met you
And I just feel so close
No sense to this feeling
Yet so true and telling

I just met you
And so much to discover
Your scars, your body, your soul
All that white to be brought whole

I just met you
And I have to let you go...


RE: The clear canvas - Altaria - 07-14-2016

Hey Rick. Wow, what can I say? Nice piece you got there Tongue


Um abraço aqui da amiga eheh

RE: The clear canvas - RP_RICK - 07-14-2016

(07-14-2016, 08:20 PM)Altaria Wrote: Hey Rick. Wow, what can I say? Nice piece you got there Tongue


Um abraço aqui da amiga eheh

Hehehe thank you
Glad you liked it Big Grin

A pastel de nata for you

RE: The clear canvas - Ghostrider65 - 10-23-2016

Wow my friend, Excellent! Very deep and moving.

RE: The clear canvas - Cath - 10-23-2016

Does it come from a real life experience?

RE: The clear canvas - _Barbie_ - 11-04-2016

Very well done, it shows emotion behind it and that can only mean one thing...

*snuggles*

RE: The clear canvas - TayYay - 11-05-2016

Wow!! sheer class of words and perfect weighted selection! i dont know what i am saying but kuddos bro for giving such a literary excerpt

RE: The clear canvas - GuyByThePond - 01-22-2017

Look who's the poet   Wink

I liked it friend