A chance...

[Altaria]

This is an old piece of mine that I just found going through some old notebooks, I was like 13 or 14 when I wrote this one.


Do I really have a chance?
Can I really take the first step?

I don't know anything of this
But I won't give up

Don't know what you think
And that is making me go crazy

I just need you to give me a chance
So I can prove to you
That I can make you happy

I don't want to hurt you
Don't want to make you feel alone

I just want to hold you
Protect you, take care of you
To warm you in those cold nights

[Simple Tania]

wow Alt, with 13/14? *trying to remember what I did with that age**------------------*

Kisses

Tania

[IvanXLIV]

Nice and expressive! ...and I, too, was reminded of my teenage years... the first crushes, the uncertainty that came with inexperience... *sighs in fond reminescence*

[Cath]

...
It's really good but...
I can't remember a good memory about my first crush...

[TayYay]

Ah the first memoirs of writing for the crush. I have some lines when i was a snobbish fat bastard:

A soft breeze, a lavishness of fields

A first kiss, a glaring first light

A powerful emotion to make me feel like

A blooming flower on the dark blight

A girl so beautiful to look forever


A girl so divine that make her eternally right

A girl so amazing that makes me feel alive

A girl so pure, she make the whole black white

Though she is married and had 3 kids but still, she was the first one i wrote something!