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A chance... - Altaria - 10-20-2016
This is an old piece of mine that I just found going through some old notebooks, I was like 13 or 14 when I wrote this one.
Do I really have a chance?
Can I really take the first step?
I don't know anything of this
But I won't give up
Don't know what you think
And that is making me go crazy
I just need you to give me a chance
So I can prove to you
That I can make you happy
I don't want to hurt you
Don't want to make you feel alone
I just want to hold you
Protect you, take care of you
To warm you in those cold nights
RE: A chance... - Simple Tania - 10-20-2016
wow Alt, with 13/14? *trying to remember what I did with that age**------------------*
Kisses
Tania
RE: A chance... - IvanXLIV - 10-20-2016
Nice and expressive!
...and I, too, was reminded of my teenage years... the first crushes, the uncertainty that came with inexperience... *sighs in fond reminescence*
RE: A chance... - Cath - 10-21-2016
...
It's really good but...
I can't remember a good memory about my first crush...
RE: A chance... - TayYay - 10-21-2016
Ah the first memoirs of writing for the crush. I have some lines when i was a snobbish fat bastard:
A soft breeze, a lavishness of fields
A first kiss, a glaring first light
A powerful emotion to make me feel like
A blooming flower on the dark blight
A girl so beautiful to look forever
A girl so divine that make her eternally right
A girl so amazing that makes me feel alive
A girl so pure, she make the whole black white
Though she is married and had 3 kids but still, she was the first one i wrote something!