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Getting High on Gnome Juice
Anallee Offline
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04-13-2016, 07:05 PM (This post was last modified: 04-13-2016, 07:46 PM by Anallee.)
Getting High on Gnome Juice
  * credit to Sally for Title and Inspiration


On a dark night
we once three shared.
Secrets of our lives.
Buried.  Still alive.

We understood.
We became one.
We cared.

Together again
in our secret place.
Our family is growing.
A bright new face.
                         ~Anallee
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04-13-2016, 07:37 PM
Another short but beautiful piece  Tongue Loved it.
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04-13-2016, 07:41 PM (This post was last modified: 04-20-2016, 07:13 AM by Anallee.)
awwwww.  Thank you Altaria Heart.   Life's short, people are busy.  But I make time to read the long ones also.
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04-13-2016, 10:24 PM
(04-13-2016, 07:41 PM)Anallee Wrote: awwwww.  Thank you Altaria Heart.   Life's short, people are busy.  But I make time to read the long ones also.

How I wish I would be as dilligent as you are... I have been most unfair to many of my fellow writers in that regard. Sad

And I agree - another beautiful piece, lady.

Cheers,

Ivan
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04-13-2016, 10:28 PM (This post was last modified: 04-14-2016, 07:59 AM by Anallee.)
(04-13-2016, 10:24 PM)IvanXLIV Wrote:
(04-13-2016, 07:41 PM)Anallee Wrote: awwwww.  Thank you Altaria Heart.   Life's short, people are busy.  But I make time to read the long ones also.

How I wish I would be as dilligent as you are... I have been most unfair to many of my fellow writers in that regard. Sad

And I agree - another beautiful piece, lady.

Cheers,

Ivan

Thank you again Ivan.  I try to get back to as many as I can because I appreciate the comments and support so very much.

Stay well my friend,
~Anallee
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04-13-2016, 10:44 PM
Agreed! Great piece. I love the effort in these short poems/stories. Very vivid. I'll admit that gnome is kind of cute Wink
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04-13-2016, 11:14 PM
(04-13-2016, 10:44 PM)Sate Wrote: Agreed! Great piece. I love the effort in these short poems/stories. Very vivid. I'll admit that gnome is kind of cute Wink

Which one Wink ?
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04-14-2016, 05:15 AM
makes me want some absinthe pretty bad
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04-14-2016, 06:34 AM
Very beautiful and thank you for that!
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04-14-2016, 07:49 AM (This post was last modified: 04-14-2016, 08:24 PM by Anallee.)
(04-14-2016, 05:15 AM)Laertes1 Wrote: makes me want some absinthe pretty bad

he he Wink
(04-14-2016, 06:34 AM)gomer Wrote: Very beautiful and thank you for that!

Thank YOU gomer  Heart
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