03-15-2016, 12:42 PM
Hey Laertes...very good indeed, love the narrative (yes, need more details to make us emphasize with the character), love the amused tone you used and although short, the main ingredients were there, congratulations my dear...and presents us with more!
Cath, I will love to read with your novels, please...SHARE WITH US!
Cath, I will love to read with your novels, please...SHARE WITH US!
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