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06-03-2016, 04:34 AM
I think my favorite line is "When she wants me I turn my head / but when I want her she's with him instead". The yearning in that statement is powerful and the rhyme couples them really well together, lending strength to the emotions that are portrayed.
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Earthquake - by brandon1op - 06-02-2016, 07:51 AM
RE: Earthquake - by Sharp - 06-02-2016, 09:50 AM
RE: Earthquake - by Lexirific - 06-02-2016, 11:17 AM
RE: Earthquake - by Altaria - 06-02-2016, 11:58 AM
RE: Earthquake - by brandon1op - 06-02-2016, 01:03 PM
RE: Earthquake - by Simple Tania - 06-02-2016, 01:36 PM
RE: Earthquake - by Cuylie - 06-03-2016, 04:34 AM
RE: Earthquake - by Lacivious - 06-06-2016, 06:26 AM
RE: Earthquake - by Jackhole - 06-07-2016, 07:57 AM

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