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Wanting You
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I like the transition of flowing sand to the parched desert; of it's weight burying you. It was an evocative image and, well for me, the beginning part was the strongest part. (I enjoyed reading the whole thing as well!)
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Wanting You - by IvanXLIV - 05-25-2016, 11:14 PM
RE: Wanting You - by Drek - 05-25-2016, 11:19 PM
RE: Wanting You - by Anallee - 05-26-2016, 12:20 AM
RE: Wanting You - by Cuylie - 05-26-2016, 01:54 AM
RE: Wanting You - by Seiryu - 05-30-2016, 12:40 AM

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