Elements (a fragmented story)

[Shiroi Kurēn]

(05-12-2016, 10:18 AM)Fenix-TS Wrote: Really amazing Shiro, love it...just a small advice, the colour my dear, the first colour it's not easy to read and that's really bad...

Thanks Fenix, I was actually looking at that first colour on my phone and thinking that it looked a lot darker than what it seemed on my computer screen.  I'll edit it to something else when I can get back into my computer I think 

(05-12-2016, 10:53 AM)Lexilicious Wrote:   *gives Shiroi a lollipop*

Yay thank you, my first Lexi-pop! *unwraps and pops it happily in my mouth*