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RE: Scrage's Cryptic Writings - Anallee - 05-06-2016

(05-06-2016, 10:59 PM)Scrage Wrote:
(05-06-2016, 09:30 PM)Anallee Wrote: Hey Scrage.  Love the rhythm of "In The Night"!  
Do you write music also?

Hi Anallee. I've actually been in bands for years, so yeah Smile

First time I've posted lyrical content anywhere before though...

Saw it and felt it!

Very, very nice.  Heart

Thank you for sharing!!

RE: Scrage's Cryptic Writings - Scrage - 05-08-2016

Rapture
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I see her,
My gaze is held.
Unblinking,
She is my world.
A vision of beauty, my eye is beholden to her.

I hear her,
She calls to me.
Listening,
All I can hear.
Her sirens call, it draws like a moth to a flame.

I smell her,
Exotic scent.
Intoxicating,
She fills my lungs.
Breathing her musk, inhaling again and again.

I taste her,
Sweet, softened lips.
Drinking,
Her elixir.
Ingesting her love, my hunger it never abates.

I touch her,
Smooth silken skin.
Caressing,
And then we embrace.
As one we contort, entangled, enraptured, with love.

RE: Scrage's Cryptic Writings - Tantrum - 05-09-2016

HEY Scrage...awesome poems, LOVE IT

RE: Scrage's Cryptic Writings - Scrage - 05-11-2016

(05-09-2016, 02:31 PM)Tantrum Wrote: HEY Scrage...awesome poems, LOVE IT

Thanks, Tantrum. Glad you and others like them  Big Grin

RE: Scrage's Cryptic Writings - Shiroi Kurēn - 05-11-2016

(05-08-2016, 05:04 PM)Scrage Wrote: Rapture
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I see her,
My gaze is held.
Unblinking,
She is my world.
A vision of beauty, my eye is beholden to her.

I hear her,
She calls to me.
Listening,
All I can hear.
Her sirens call, it draws like a moth to a flame.

I smell her,
Exotic scent.
Intoxicating,
She fills my lungs.
Breathing her musk, inhaling again and again.

I taste her,
Sweet, softened lips.
Drinking,
Her elixir.
Ingesting her love, my hunger it never abates.

I touch her,
Smooth silken skin.
Caressing,
And then we embrace.
As one we contort, entangled, enraptured, with love.

This is my favourite thus far Scrage, a piece that engages the senses.  It captures the infatuation and adoration beautifully.  Keep them coming, it's always entertaining to read your writing!

RE: Scrage's Cryptic Writings - Lexirific - 05-11-2016

(05-11-2016, 01:45 PM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote: This is my favourite thus far Scrage, a piece that engages the senses.  It captures the infatuation and adoration beautifully.  Keep them coming, it's always entertaining to read your writing!

knowing the person this poem is about, I can honestly say she is the most deserving of such feelings of anybody I have ever met. it is impossible not to feel infatuation and adoration for her; she truly is wonderful. I am sure she is honoured and so happy that she inspires in this way. Heart

RE: Scrage's Cryptic Writings - Anallee - 05-11-2016

Yeah, "Rapture"  Heart
My favorite so far.  Completely sympatico.