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She-Beast
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Well, I am going to try and keep writing things. I appreciate the amount of views I had on my last one, and hopefully this one is a little better. Thank you again for viewing ^^


The full moon beckons, her nails stained in blood
His back stings from carnal pleasure, the thirst deepens
Her jagged smile calls to him, closing distance
His senses are dulled by her poison, the hunt begins

Primal fury leads them, through the wood of dark
Her scent keeps him in check, as she looks for prey
His pulse quickens, her smile gleams
Her lips re-moistened as if to taste her victim

Her hand grabs his wrist, her eyes wide in joy
A finger directs his attention, departing once more
Quick as lightning, the prey falls to her whim.
The nails used for pleasure, now releases its spirit

She bays at the moon, triumphant of her kill
Her eyes change, luring her mate towards
Her teeth cut through the meat, her hands to his face
She kisses the sanguine taste to him.

Once more his senses dull, and partakes of the kill
Knowing his mate to be sane and he safe from harm
She licks his neck before nipping it so
Primal lust setting in once more
In the darkest moments, you find the light that has always driven you.
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#2
I really liked this one, Insydious... beautifully written and so evocative.
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
The Goddess -
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#3
Beautiful! Lucky for us to pressure you to post it here! Smile

P.S. The story beneath this piece, somehow sounds familiar for some reason....is it just me Syd? xD
A wise man always say: 
"Make Love, Not War"
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Thank you IvanXLIV, and Bansai I do not know if it comes from something. It is very possible though.
In the darkest moments, you find the light that has always driven you.
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