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Why it is so difficult?
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And well, again, that moment come,
In which his words should reach afar.
But as always, in his case,
That's a task he'd hardly overcome.

And he stood there, frozen up,
Thinking where he should began,
What to say and what to do,
So the message will reach where it needs to.

So there he thought;
He searched, he pondered and he tried,
To find a way to say the words,
The words which would clear his mind;

But as many times before,
He failed.
At this impossible task for him;
To simply say,
"I love you"
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#2
Awww.
Really well done, I like the broken rhymes!
And it's in you there, you'll find the way just as you found these words. Let'em flow.
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#3
Yay! New poems!
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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#4
Hey Vroo Vroo, I always knew that you had a poet soul my dear friend. I simply Love it!
To be simple is to be great
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#5
Thank you Barbie!
And I'm glad that you like it Tania! Smile
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#6
Make me think of a chat we had in game ;-) 
Hey, you've got your way with words friend
Making a girl smile can be much more rewarding than bedding her...
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#7
Well, thank you for your words, Ian.
And, in fact, I wrote this piece when I had to take something off my chest. But I couldn't find any other way to do it, than this here.
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#8
it s goood
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