Spider

[brandon1op]

Spider

Her love is like a Spiders

Dangerous and Life Threatening

Some may find her a challenge

But others find her deadly

When we mate 

I feel my fluids leave my body

I am her meal

There for her survival

She is a Spider

Sucking me dry

So all that's left of me

Is a empty Husk

of Who I once was

[Cuylie]

I was surprised by the turn this took. I think the line that I like the most is "I am her meal / There for her survival" I don't know, it feels like something is driving this more than simple emotion, but something more primitive more elemental.

[brandon1op]

thank you..that means alot

[Lacivious]

This reminds me of a few RP sessions ive had XD
This is written much better tho =3