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We Will See
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We will see, come what may,
The path to the future moves only one way,
Time moves on no matter our plans,
Of our intent, the design of our hands,
We will see

The path to the future moves only one way,
We all walk together, what can I say?
Of our intent, the design of our hands,
We will see

We all walk together, what can I say?
Of our hopes and fears, come what may,
Time moves on no matter our plans,
Hope for even better than this last day,
And in such a myriad varied way,
We will see.

I decided to try something different. I combined a rondeau with a pantoum and based it all around a very common saying of a dear friend. Does this work? We will see.
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#2
yes indeed Kyr...WE WILL SEE!! beautiful piece, loved it
To be simple is to be great
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#3
Thanks Fenix Smile
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#4
It does work Smile
Every word a world
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