03-30-2016, 03:53 PM
I often find that by focussing too hard on rhymes, you lose meaning. As Ivan said, poetry need not rhyme, nor does it need a natural rhythm. When a river forges its path it has no set course, yet it still flows, does it not? The current may change, some parts may flow faster than others. Poetry is the same, and yours is always a river I eenjoy journeying down.