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Musa del Corazón (a poem written in english... mostly)
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(03-15-2016, 05:38 AM)Laertes1 Wrote: hi Ivan read yours and i like it quite a bit.  Also welcoming feedback on my piece "detective of secrets"

I would love to know more about the skin tone of the exotic, is he or she ebony?  tanned or chalky?  but other than that it's quite romantic

Hello Laertes,

It would be my pleasure to comment on "detective of secrets" - will do ASAP! Smile

As for the lady, I honestly don't know... but tanned skin is probably a good bet, and so would be ebony. She certainly isn't pale or chalky!

Ivan
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
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RE: Musa del Corazón (a poem written in english... mostly) - by IvanXLIV - 03-15-2016, 11:47 AM

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