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Musa del Corazón (a poem written in english... mostly)
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hi Ivan read yours and i like it quite a bit. Also welcoming feedback on my piece "detective of secrets"

I would love to know more about the skin tone of the exotic, is he or she ebony? tanned or chalky? but other than that it's quite romantic
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RE: Musa del Corazón (a poem written in english... mostly) - by Laertes1 - 03-15-2016, 05:38 AM

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