11-29-2017, 08:25 PM
1) For me, you should keep posting parts in the same thread.
That way, if somebody likes it, he suscribes and gets informed when something new is posted (that's what I'm gonna do now
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2) Another good piece.
A tad more on the "speaking to your loins" part, yet making it slide towards the shame/fun part.
I like how you use sex to speak of something that is not sex.
That way, if somebody likes it, he suscribes and gets informed when something new is posted (that's what I'm gonna do now
)2) Another good piece.
A tad more on the "speaking to your loins" part, yet making it slide towards the shame/fun part.
I like how you use sex to speak of something that is not sex.
Making a girl smile can be much more rewarding than bedding her...