01-15-2016, 06:51 PM
(01-15-2016, 01:12 PM)Python Wrote: It was really awesome. How you used every sense for detailing made the story more real. You made Murphy an interesting character that we wanted to succeed and learn more about.
All in all, it was pretty great! Can't wait to see more of your work.
Thanks man, I'll do my best to make another short story soon.