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The Tank Killer. (My first short story I've ever written.)
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01-15-2016, 01:12 PM
It was really awesome. How you used every sense for detailing made the story more real. You made Murphy an interesting character that we wanted to succeed and learn more about.
All in all, it was pretty great! Can't wait to see more of your work.
Not sure if i want Rock n Roll or Jazz during the sex scenes... Cool
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RE: The Tank Killer. (My first short story I've ever written.) - by Python - 01-15-2016, 01:12 PM

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