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New stage, new play... A collaborative experiment
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Hello fellow forumners !
For those that don't know me, everything's here: http://www.mnfclub.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=1518
Always wanted to write a story with a little help from my friends.
Cindra accepted.
Good news: Cindra speaks natively english, and she's quite the wordsmith.
Don't expect swashbuckling between us, but some belts may unbuckle...

So, without further ado, I'm posting the incipit :-)
(Cindra will reply later, we're not in the same time zone)

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 Slrrp,  slrrp, slrrp. 
It's not the sound that woke me up first. At the beginning, it was this feeling my glans was huge and burning, sunk in a moist and magic potion, suspended from the stiff and hard shaft my erect dick is.
My eyes are closed, my mind is at peace, focused on the heat and moisture that's now all over my cock.
Slrrp, slrrp, slrrp.
The sound is somewhat hypnotic, all the more it's like an echo to what I feel with my dick. A languid back and forth between the nearly electric 
excitation of my glans and the soothing dive of my rod in a lukewarm bath.
Slrrp, slrrp, slrrp.
Cindra is sucking me. Just thinking this, my cock hardens in her mouth. She alternates the licks on the brake or the crown of my glans (to nudge me) with the throating of my cock (to make me cum). From time to time, she dives her nose in my balls, to smell them while massaging them delicately with her mouth.
I open my eyes.
I see my dick between her lips, glistening from her saliva. She looks back at me, hornier as she feels my cock getting harder and bigger.
Slrrp, slrrp, slrrp
She puts her hand at the base of my rod and begins to wank me slowly. "You were so hard when I woke up, I thought I had to suck you !"
"I love your mouth, please go on"
Cindra goes back to her blowjob. As she knows I'm completely woke up now, she acts with vigour, gulping as much of my dick between her lips as she can, twirling her tongue, her hand following the rythm of her mouth. She wanks the part of my cock she can't throat.
I love this unique feeling of being literally pumped. I feel the sperm accumulating in my balls. I feel the weight of my full balls, stretching my cremaster. I feel my rod hardening and swelling even more. I feel my glans opening. I imagine the eye of my uretra dilated in her mouth, opening more each time she uses her tongue.
"it's so good, Cindra, keep sucking me"
She gives the tempo. I can only follow. I fight (a little) against the rising pleasure, then I surrender and let myself go.
Slrrp, slrrp, slrrp. 
The sound is more frenzied. Cindra knows I'm about to cum. While she's wanking my cock moist from her saliva and my presperm, she looks at me, lascivious: "I'm going to make you jizz with my mouth"
My cock shakes as she says that. Cindra uses this moment to take me back in her mouth, slooooowly making my shaft disappear between her lips, going as deep as she can. When she's there, she looks at me one last time.
"Fuck ! So good ! C'mon, make me cum" I nearly shout it
SLRRP,  SLRRP 
She sucks quick and strong. I feel the sperm rising from my balls to my glans. it's like a wave. My dick, my tip are dilated like 10, 100 times. My body is tense, hard, from what she's doing with her mouth. She is like the moon and me the tide.
"RAAAH!!!"
I cum in her mouth. I melt in her mouth. I cry in her mouth.
It's stolen time, an orgasm I don't want to stop.
Then it stops. Cindra makes a half amused half bothered face and goes swiftly to the bathroom while I try to find my breath back and smile at the same time.
5 minutes later, she's lovingly nested in my arms. I'm relaxed.
"Ian ?" 
"Yes ?" 
"I hope you'll be hard again in no time, because now I've got an urgent need of your dick in my pussy !"
We smile both. "For you, I'll find a way, always"
Making a girl smile can be much more rewarding than bedding her...
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New stage, new play... A collaborative experiment - by GuyByThePond - 03-04-2017, 03:53 PM

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