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A poem.
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The writing style and intonation are very good. As for the essence of it, I've listened three times, each time trying to give it the presumption of innocence - but I can't stop myself from thinking it is a carefully constructed and thinly veiled ode to hypocrisy. I can hear the promise of empathy, the illusion of understanding and the empowerment of a call to unity - but it feels like the foundation of it is built on nothing but a failure to ask the right questions - or even identify what they are. And that in itself is a recipe for blind hatred - a hatred that's far more insidious than the one it preaches against. 

Then again, a good work of art is supposed to be polarizing and open to interpretation.
Leave your shame and your doubts at the door. 
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A poem. - by Emmie - 01-03-2016, 04:20 AM
RE: A poem. - by V3ol - 01-03-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: A poem. - by MisterSmiles - 01-03-2016, 02:16 PM
RE: A poem. - by Cath - 01-03-2016, 03:06 PM
RE: A poem. - by Emmie - 01-03-2016, 04:05 PM
RE: A poem. - by juicylucy - 01-03-2016, 06:26 PM

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