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Imagine Yourself
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07-04-2016, 03:35 AM
I like the dichotomy you set up. It creates tension, conflict and uncertainty that you can see echoed in the last line of the poem. I like the lines, "I pick broken glass from the ground/I turn them into birds that are destined to fly." It kinda has a magic to it that I enjoy!
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Imagine Yourself - by Chamy - 07-04-2016, 02:37 AM
RE: Imagine Yourself - by Cuylie - 07-04-2016, 03:35 AM
RE: Imagine Yourself - by Chamy - 07-04-2016, 04:30 AM
RE: Imagine Yourself - by Sharp - 07-04-2016, 04:37 AM
RE: Imagine Yourself - by -J- - 07-04-2016, 07:51 PM
RE: Imagine Yourself - by Cath - 07-04-2016, 09:05 PM
RE: Imagine Yourself - by RP_RICK - 07-05-2016, 05:50 AM
RE: Imagine Yourself - by Willy_for_Boobies - 07-05-2016, 06:29 PM

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