06-27-2016, 01:57 PM
I always have a hard time critiquing what you write JC. It punches me in the feelings each time (that sounds more uncomfortable than it is).
The second stanza really sticks with me. Just, the whole image you painted there is really quite poignant; it makes me wonder how many people really feel that way.
The second stanza really sticks with me. Just, the whole image you painted there is really quite poignant; it makes me wonder how many people really feel that way.