Oh sweet Mary of God, Fen, this moment is amazing, for me, the best one so far, loved all the action, all the details, all the teasing's between you and her, the sad part is also remarkable and touchy and you even ended with current references... LOVE IT!
I agree with cath, you definitely should think in writing a book, if not about your area of expertise, an erotic book, I totally buy it!
I agree with cath, you definitely should think in writing a book, if not about your area of expertise, an erotic book, I totally buy it!