(05-05-2016, 02:03 PM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote:(05-05-2016, 09:11 AM)Anallee Wrote:Thank you, hopefully I'll be able to share some of my work here soon as well! I am glad that you have found happiness like that, it sounds dreamy!(05-05-2016, 09:03 AM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote:(05-05-2016, 08:18 AM)Anallee Wrote:Mirrors
She can deal with stress and heavy burdens.
She can comfort and console.
She can nurture and soothe.
She smiles when she feels like screaming,
and sings when she feels like crying.
She cries when she's happy,
and laughs when she's afraid.
Her love unconditional.
Her loyalty unquestionable.
Her devotion inexhaustible.
There is only one thing wrong with her.
She sometimes forgets what she's worth.
~Anallee
Your muse sounds like a wonderful person. Makes me wonder if it is someone you are writing about, or if it is self reflection. Regardless where the inspiration came from, it's a lovely piece of writing, keep up the great work!
Thank you so much Shiroi Kuren! Coming from you that is surely high praise indeed. My muse is the most beautiful soul and we find inspiration in one another's reflections.
~Anallee
(05-05-2016, 12:57 PM)Willy_for_Boobies Wrote: This wonderfull poem ,I love this interpretation Willy. Made me re-read the whole thing with my mother in mind. Thank-you for the insight!
could be just taken as the thoughts about the first wonderfull and loving person
we all know first in our lives......
.... our mothers ...... ;-)
.. 8. may ..... is mothers day ..... ;-)
I can't wait Shiroi Kuren! Yesssss, dreamy and wonderful. Mothers, too!! So perceptive.