Ephemeral

[DarkXtecy]

(04-20-2016, 07:28 AM)Anallee Wrote:

(04-18-2016, 10:24 AM)DarkXtecy Wrote: I once knew of a lady who
through pain and scars she fought through
her smile and aura unfolded like a bloom
i know she still there and believe in her too

*looks through the thick darkness and see you
easy to spot coz light always radiate from you*

ahh there you are Anallee, the lady i know
that can always fight through.

(ok yeah...never done a poem...and this is like my worst attempt on something i dont have skills nor talent of...but i hope it makes some sense)

Dear Dark,

Sorry to take so long to get back to you.  The reason is somewhere in this thread.  The important thing is it bothered me that I did not respond sooner.

So, your first attempt at poetry you say.  You have skillz you don't realise.  I would like to see more.  Only two people in my entire life have written a poem for me.  Both here, and you are one of them.  You two fight it out as to who is my first  .  Most importantly the heartfelt intent is there.  I felt it and I love it.

~ Anallee

Gorgeous Anallee (one with a radiant smile)

Its ok hun...no need for sorry, I think you already mentioned thanks to every one earlier, and i know i was included in that, so pleas dont stress about it. 

And yes my first attempt in this forum....or second i think...i wrote one for Fenix as well but was shorter then this  ..and honestly it only happens when feeling really hit deep inside, so in normal case, words just dont come out, but even when i do write it, I lack the structure to form it in words...and thank you I feel honored I was one of them.

Am glade you loved it, i just hope you continue to get stronger   as for the other guy, well there is just no way I can compete with him, words are my weakness, and i admit it lol.