Reinforcements

[-J-]

The hour was bleak indeed

And never did I think the tide would turn.

I was in such desperate need --

The hour was bleak indeed.

I had so many mouths to feed --

There was no kindling left to burn.

The hour was bleak indeed

And never did I think the tide would turn.

Then they rode in with armor shimmering blue!

Charging with lances polished, striking true

On they rode towards the looming legions

Without any single hesitation

The chargers rode towards the devastation

Hand-picked souls from all across the regions

Ready and willing and able to fight --

And that they did all through the day and night

The teeming hordes ridiculed and doubted

Our resolve. Yet there the masses routed --

Sent back into the depths in rank defeat

And when they returned to the camp for respite

The commander thanked me for my feat --

My defiance against the raging despot.

What heroic deeds have done?

They struck the killing blows -- I made none.

Why should I have glory to claim?

All I did was tend the flame.

Without them the day could not be won!

Of my deeds -- could they say the same?

[IvanXLIV]

A really enjoyable piece, my friend.

It's refreshing to see authors like yourself write about something else than sex, love and relationships *mockingly points at myself while saying this*; your own offering has a certain epic feel to it... and perhaps, an allegorical one? Just saying, because you helped "tend the flame" for a lot of people around here... 

Kudos,

Ivan

[-J-]

If it makes you feel better Ivan, I did consider a poem about a threesome with an orc and two draenei...

Edit: Draenei are these blue tentacle-haired, cloven-hooved aliens with thick Russian accents.

[IvanXLIV]

(02-28-2017, 01:55 AM)JCF Wrote: If it makes you feel better Ivan, I did consider a poem about a threesome with an orc and two draenei...

... and now you've lost me completely   (but I'm sure that poem would turn out quite good)! Draenei... those are elves, right? (sorry to display so blatantly my sheer ignorance of those fantasy races)