Autumn Dream

[IvanXLIV]

Hello all,

I haven't posted my writings in ages... lots of things happened in the past few months, and most of them none too pleasant. But I plan on gradually coming back to the forum and be an active participant again.

Here is my latest offering, thanks in no small part to a new Muse who rekindled my creativity and fires up my imagination; I hope you'll like it.

Without further ado...

Autumn Dream

 The morning air is cool and crisp, night frost melting
Under the rising orb's pallid rays. Wispy strands
Of slumber dissipate, oneiric neverlands
Effaced by wakeful consciousness, yet enduring
 
     Dream images of vivid clarity linger;
     On a southern shore blessed with tranquil, sunlitten
     Stretches of undulating sand I was smitten
     By a breathtaking sight rising from the water...
 
There you stood in glorious, arousing nakedness,
Fiery nereid of flame-colored locks wetly
Glistening in the light, fine droplets of salty
Dew dotting your fair skin. The sea breeze's caress
 
     Carried the spicy tang of lustful desire
     Radiating hotly from your shapely curves,
     Stoking the fire already searing my nerves...
     As your emerald-hued eyes beckoned me nigher
 
Deep carnal impulses took over unrestrained;
As I ravished you with sudden, feral passion,
We tumbled down, embracing in wild abandon,
Roughly copulating in the tide, sustained
 
     By each other's moans and cries of surging pleasure.
     Soon climactic outcome washed over our entwined,
     Quivering bodies... Sated at last, we reclined
     In the receding surf, witnessing at leisure
 
The glow of sunset setting ablaze the foaming
crests of the ocean gently lapping at our feet.
Such is the remembered dream, told without conceit,
That gladdens my soul on this bright autumn morning.

Ivan

[Simple Tania]

And that is... WOW, what a come back my dear friend!

I missed your poems so much *get up and start clapping, cheering him*

[Altaria]

One more time to amaze us all with your pieces Ivan  Loved it

[IvanXLIV]

Thank you my friends - I stand reassured; seems I can still weave a decent line or two

Ivan

[Renzy]

(10-13-2016, 11:21 AM)IvanXLIV Wrote: Hello all,

I haven't posted my writings in ages... lots of things happened in the past few months, and most of them none too pleasant. But I plan on gradually coming back to the forum and be an active participant again.

Here is my latest offering, thanks in no small part to a new Muse who rekindled my creativity and fires up my imagination; I hope you'll like it.

Without further ado...

Autumn Dream

 The morning air is cool and crisp, night frost melting
Under the rising orb's pallid rays. Wispy strands
Of slumber dissipate, oneiric neverlands
Effaced by wakeful consciousness, yet enduring
 
     Dream images of vivid clarity linger;
     On a southern shore blessed with tranquil, sunlitten
     Stretches of undulating sand I was smitten
     By a breathtaking sight rising from the water...
 
There you stood in glorious, arousing nakedness,
Fiery nereid of flame-colored locks wetly
Glistening in the light, fine droplets of salty
Dew dotting your fair skin. The sea breeze's caress
 
     Carried the spicy tang of lustful desire
     Radiating hotly from your shapely curves,
     Stoking the fire already searing my nerves...
     As your emerald-hued eyes beckoned me nigher
 
Deep carnal impulses took over unrestrained;
As I ravished you with sudden, feral passion,
We tumbled down, embracing in wild abandon,
Roughly copulating in the tide, sustained
 
     By each other's moans and cries of surging pleasure.
     Soon climactic outcome washed over our entwined,
     Quivering bodies... Sated at last, we reclined
     In the receding surf, witnessing at leisure
 
The glow of sunset setting ablaze the foaming
crests of the ocean gently lapping at our feet.
Such is the remembered dream, told without conceit,
That gladdens my soul on this bright autumn morning.

Ivan