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Guilty pleasures... shared (a collaborative effort) - IvanXLIV - 05-10-2016
Hello people,
The following text is a collaborative effort between misslanni - my dear beloved
- and I... She wrote this lovely reflection in prose to me, which in turn inspired me to answer with a poem of my own; at her suggestion, we blended together the two texts, yielding the following "dialogue". (notes on the heavy editing of November 20th, 2016: With great sadness and reluctance, but ultimately out of respect for mislanni's request, I have redacted out her contribution to this poem. Her departure is keenly felt. I miss her deeply
)Guilty pleasures ...shared
You shared with me one of the most precious treasures,
Letting me glimpse once more your soul’s shining radiance
By revealing to my heart your guilty pleasures
So beautifully wrought in prose; a dreamlike trance
Captivates my mind whenever I read those lines
And transports me to dreamland fields lying yonder,
Where those fancies of yours await, of such designs
As to overwhelm us with deep, lustful wonder…
Gladly would I join you in that room with a view
Of breathtaking natural vistas, completely
Offered to your passionate desires, ‘til you
And I achieve the sweet release of ecstasy.
Goaded by your seductive titillation,
Pressing you against the wall you described aptly,
I would boldly answer your passive submission
With mouth, hand and cock ‘til you climax noisily…
Diving skyclad in the tranquil, flowing waters
Under that moonlit mountainside, we would entwine
Limbs and join lips lustily, carnal explorers
Bound to partake of love’s most delectable wine.
Whether making tender love on a remote beach
Or having raunchy, steamy sex in the shower,
I shall gladly join your dreams, my love, sharing each
And every guilty pleasures you have to offer.
Cheers, Ivan
RE: Guilty pleasures... shared (a collaborative effort) - Simple Tania - 05-10-2016
wow...*STANDING OVATION* that is....superb, amazing...I cant adjective more...WOW, WOW, WOW
RE: Guilty pleasures... shared (a collaborative effort) - RP_RICK - 05-10-2016
Great read indeed
RE: Guilty pleasures... shared (a collaborative effort) - Sate - 05-10-2016
Beautiful piece. This is what the first story "Meant" I posted was originally but I cut her parts out. Bravo!
RE: Guilty pleasures... shared (a collaborative effort) - IvanXLIV - 05-10-2016
(05-10-2016, 07:07 PM)misslanni Wrote: I really don't mean to brag but I love how this piece flowed for both of us without planning or putting a lot of effort into it. Thanks to everyone for their lovely comments and for reading, it means a lot.
I think you are perfecty entitled to brag, my dear...
*pokes misslanni teasingly*On a less whimsical note, allow me to add my heartfelt thanks to misslanni's - your support and kind comments are always appreciated!
RE: Guilty pleasures... shared (a collaborative effort) - Seiryu - 05-30-2016
Congratulations misslanni and IvavXLIV. A delightful collaborative effort.