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Addicted to you... - IvanXLIV - 05-09-2016
Hello people,
I haven't posted poems in a while (there really should be 36 hours in a day, not 24), but I was inspired to write the following for nearly a week... I hope you enjoy it. As usual, feel free to comment and rate it!
Addicted to you
The first tremors wake me in the night, shivering,
Cold, clammy sweat drenching my bedsheets heavily;
I rise through a haze of pain, confused and shaking
Nausea assails me, cramps wracking my belly…
Each second spent away from you is pure torment,
Withdrawal symptoms kicking in painfully hard;
I’m so addicted to you that every moment
Without you leaves my heart in distress, its pulse marred
By your absence. I crave you so, suffer this curse
So badly, oh sweet escape from reality…
You are the green absinth fairy slaking my thirst,
The heroin of my innermost fantasy;
Soulmate of mine, how utterly you complete me…
Of this blissful addiction I can’t recover
Nor would I ever want to be; your love truly
Is the only drug I need, now and forever.
Ivan
RE: Addicted to you... - Shiroi Kurēn - 05-09-2016
Beautiful work Ivan, I can feel your sweet addiction reading through your prose. Well done, and I hope that there is more to come!
RE: Addicted to you... - Anallee - 05-09-2016
Hey Ivan,
Welcome back! Beautiful! And, are you reading my mind? I feel your addiction also.
RE: Addicted to you... - Altaria - 05-10-2016
Wow, another great piece from you Ivan. Guess she grabbed you by the stomach xD (just kidding) She must be an amazing person to put you on that state.
RE: Addicted to you... - Seiryu - 05-30-2016
Such a powerful and moving piece, especially the last stanza. I too have had these feeling towards things in my life, but never as strong as towards my soulmate. Thank you for this.