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Star loving night - Altaria - 04-14-2016
In a land of beautiful green
I see a runing lady
She's enjoying the happy moment
Her caring lover, holds her tight and firm
She lays on the field with him
And dreams of the day they met
She admires the same starlight night from those days
And wonders "Will this night last?"
She gets closer to him and rests her head on his chest
While he enjoys her company that warms his heart
She knows this moment to be their loving one
He knows this moment to make her happy like no other
RE: Star loving night - Simple Tania - 04-14-2016
ohhh alt, you did it again, ahhh I don't care, in Portuguese now
Alt, tu és muito especial, a forma como consegues descrever o que te vai na alma...deixa-me arrepiada!
RE: Star loving night - Anallee - 04-14-2016
(04-14-2016, 08:10 PM)Altaria Wrote: In a land of beautiful green
I see a runing lady
She's enjoying the happy moment
Her caring lover, holds her tight and firm
She lays on the field with him
And dreams of the day they met
She admires the same starlight night from those days
And wonders "Will this night last?"
She gets closer to him and rests her head on his chest
While he enjoys her company that warms his heart
She knows this moment to be their loving one
He knows this moment to make her happy like no other
Thank you Altaria. You just painted a beautiful picture for me.
RE: Star loving night - Altaria - 04-14-2016
Well, I try to put a bit of my heart into it
This one I just wrote right now. Didn't have a proper script or anything, just imagined myself on that situation and built upon it
RE: Star loving night - IvanXLIV - 04-14-2016
That was so beautiful, Altaria...
it touched me in a very special way, because it reminds me of my own, recent experiences...Ivan
RE: Star loving night - Seiryu - 05-31-2016
Thank you Altaria for taking me away for a while.