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Star gazing - Altaria - 04-02-2016
Tonight I looked upon the sky
Imagined a way to come back
A way to change the past
A way to find my future
The moments that passed
Will never come back
The memories last
But the feelings will collapse
Not my usual piece, a bit short and jumps all over. Just one that I needed to write down.
RE: Star gazing - Simple Tania - 04-02-2016
Well, short but meaningful, and very beautiful as usual in your poems my dear
RE: Star gazing - IvanXLIV - 04-03-2016
Good things come in small (or short) packages... very nice as always, Altaria.