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From then til now - Poetinho - 03-29-2016
Hello, I dont think you will know me. But i want to share something with you all. I am not here often, so I will not have time to answer or describe anything. But the one right person knows this. Because she experienced all this with me. So, here is our history my dear:
Last year, last days in the end of decembre
You know? I do! I still can remember
I was there at the shore, busy with talking
And then there were you - barefoot and walking
You got my attention - my eyes were at you
Your eyes? Your body? I dont have a clue
And later your words - what an impact you made
Name it chance - name it luck - i call it fate
We talked - You left - but gave me your mail
We met, wrote, talked - learned some detail
It took us time to know - looking, asking for more
But that first time - a dream - feelings to core
Repeated, once, twice - endless times til today
What a chemistry - totally awesome - not just okay
We found our times - waited days or a week
Anticipation - raising - released next we meet
We had fun - soft or hard and things between
Being in bed, bridge or cave - mostly unseen
Using toys, being bad - no one else - just we two
Having fun has a new meaning - since i met you
There where bad times too - stress, not so nice
Serious trouble, screams, silence - playing fire and ice
But we cleared it all - being stronger than before
Being close again: At the bridge, the forest or our shore
Having talks alone or with friends - watching our group grow
A couple first - and now one more! We know cupid - and his bow
Trouble again - seeing creeps - more than just one troll
That doesnt matter, we stay together, we will not fall
Calming down - climb on the hill - enjoying the view
Ignoring others - stay silent - dont give them a clue
Speaking in private, in temple or at your floor
Speaking daily, for hours, talk more and more
So, my dear? Her we are. You and me
Strong together. Divided, just by the sea
Music and mind - words and time - a lot we share
You know, I do? How much I care? I will be there
What will we do? What will be there?
This big distance - its just not fair!
Come to the beach - Lets see the sun!
Come to the beach - Where it begun.
RE: From then til now - Vrook - 03-29-2016
*clap* Really wonderful and with a lot of feeling in it! All described so well! Very nice!
RE: From then til now - Simple Tania - 03-29-2016
Very good indeed...love it!
RE: From then til now - IvanXLIV - 03-31-2016
Poetinho,
A very nice and heartwarming piece... I'm sure I'm not the only one who saw similarities with his/her own game experiences through your narrative. I hope we will see more of your creative endeavors here!
Cheers
,Ivan