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New year's eve - Altaria - 03-12-2016
I'm going to post something a bit different from my usual piece. So, tell me how is it. Even if it's not a great piece. This was written a few years back, when I was thinking about a few things in my life and stuff in the new year's eve.
Last days of a revealing year
A year of change
A year of discovery
Last days of a long winter
Found myself thinking
How will the future be
Hardships and storms seem to destroy
What were once dreams of a lifetime
Found myself lost
Without a destination
On a moment where I should
Have found a path, a way out
RE: New year's eve - Simple Tania - 03-12-2016
Alt, like usual, a great piece, kisses
RE: New year's eve - Laudo - 03-12-2016
I like too ^^
RE: New year's eve - IvanXLIV - 03-15-2016
A nice offering as always, miss Altaria... with much feeling poured into it.
Lovely!Ivan