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Looking back - Altaria - 03-07-2016
Looking back
And remember the moment
That I met you
Brings me joy
Knowing you
Became my everyday purpose
Look at your face
To find your smile
And bring me comfort
Lost myself on your simplicity
Found my world
On your friendship
Long I've waited
To meet someone like this
A lot I dreamed
About having you here
Would like you to know
How much I love you
Would like to hold you
On an endless moment
I wait by the moment
Where we find ourselfs
Where a smile is enough
To hold us both on a loving embrace
RE: Looking back - Kyrios - 03-07-2016
I rather liked this. The patterning of the stanzas was interesting. The feelings were also clear in expression. *Smiles* I enjoy your contributions.
RE: Looking back - Sharp - 03-07-2016
That is.. *pauses for a moment, trying to think of an appropriate word* stunningly beautiful.
RE: Looking back - Simple Tania - 03-08-2016
Alt my dear... LOVE IT, for real, you and sharp are making me waist a fortune in paper tissues!
RE: Looking back - W1LL - 03-08-2016
very beautiful that's all that needs to be said about this.