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Bubbling Crimson Dusk - Fernins - 05-19-2018
Here's a little something. A bit on the down side and not my everyday poetry piece but I've been feeling like this for a while now and I had to let it out somehow. I won't say 'Hope you enjoy' because..... well it's not to enjoy. That being said, hope at least to get some critics about it.
Feeling lost
Hanging by a thread
Can't shake.... shake this weight off of my shoulders
Can't bear this loneliness
Can't take it any other way
Bursting in rage
Drowned by my sorrow
Blaming the world and cursing to the wind
I can't have it if it's... it's like this
I'm sorry........ but this is just not enough
My body aches
My soul shakes
My heart brakes
My mind wanders off
And I can't take it this way