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The dinner to remember - Fernins - 07-24-2017
Well, here I'm again xD Twice in a day, the previous one was a bit more on the down side, melancholic feelings and such. This one, being kind of a continuation of the "saga" of "A girl and the [season]" is a bit more cheerfull and optimistic. Hope you enjoy it
We had that dinner, the one I had been waiting for so long
You were wearing that beautiful blue dress, I thought "What a sight"
I couldn't believe how lucky I was, how great my life was with you
Later we went to a nearby disco, to hangout with some friends
So we drinked a bit, we smiled a lot
We had a few dances close together, I couldn't forget the shine and glistening of your round, big and full of live eyes
After a while, you were getting sleepy and a bit tired
So I took you by the hand, we said goodbye to our friends
And we walked towards the car, while you gently and slowly rested your head on my shoulders and I held you closer
As soon as you got in the car, you leaned back the seat and took a nap
So I decided to wrap you in my jacket, was a cold night
But even so you looked lovely sleeping
I tried to get you home without disturbing your sleep
But midway, you asked "Are we there?"
I said "Sorry if I woke you up, but no, we still have a few more minutes to go"
You smiled, thanked me for the jacket and gave me a sweet, tender kiss saying "Thank you for the amazing night"
After a bit, I walked with her to the front door,
Thanked her for the dinner and company and kissed her
Holding her close and tight
RE: The dinner to remember - Simple Tania - 07-24-2017
Another great piece, in Fernins style that I learned to appreciate, keep up the good work, or, as an old joke I used to say, long, looooong time ago - Keep them c(u)mming!
RE: The dinner to remember - Fernins - 07-25-2017
Well, thank you for those words. I'll try to come up with something every now and then.