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Nothing of anything - Simple Tania - 07-22-2017
When you fall asleep and there’s a void
My body becomes iceness, I can’t avoid
Even if you feel it, you don’t say nothing
When you hug me, all of me shudders
When you kiss me, everything judders
But you can’t feel it nor know anything
When you warm me I stay in your arms
When you forget me, I lose my charms
You don’t even feel absolutely nothing
When your sighs breaches the silence
When your desires turns into a tyrant
You don’t even know nor say anything
When I touch you for the bottom time
And the train whistles in a final rhyme
It was the hour, for me to say nothing
And you stay quiet, watching me leave
As you stayed silent, when I was grieve
You really can’t feel nothing of anything
It matters little to you, to whom I give
You never struggled, for what I believe
I was so right and you were so wrong!
You stay quiet, you don’t say anything
You keep standing, you know nothing
Knowing, feeling, saying… for so long!
RE: Nothing of anything - Gamma.. - 07-22-2017
ohh man u never cease to make me speechless...... great work im jealous gee.......<3
RE: Nothing of anything - Fernins - 07-22-2017
It's a nice piece indeed, makes you wonder about how a partner sees the other and acknowledges the others feelings and such.