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Warm thoughts - Simple Tania - 07-06-2017
You came with nothing to show
And the look who has not
Anything more to loose
The wine was not good
The band had no tone
But you made the night profuse
You sent my loneliness away
Brightened the flag of dawn
With your unsteady pace
And the paradise you drawn
I was crazy about you
And soon rejuvenated
I could not fail!
Providing for me,
The eloquence of love
In an infinite scale
I showed you the origin
Of good and the reverse,
And I proved that your unsteady pace
Is all that matters in the universe
So please… light my fire and burn me up
Let your fire wrap me, till the music end
Give me warm, don’t let the cold come in
Close your arms and make my wings bend
RE: Warm thoughts - Fernins - 07-06-2017
Really nice one. Thanks for such a piece
RE: Warm thoughts - Willy_for_Boobies - 07-06-2017
Wonderful and romantic ;-)) I liiike it very much ;-))