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"Regret", or a sad post - carnacien - 02-08-2017
I once had an amazing fling,
I thought we wanted the same thing .
But she let me inside her real big heart,
And while i didnt wanna see her hurt,
The words that i used to please,
proved to be a contageous disease.
All the lies i used to make us feel good,
in the end, were revealed to be rude.
So heed the warning from the story i tell,
for it can never end too well.
The knight's armor might be shiny,
But the man inside will be tiny.
And all he can say is many times sorry,
But no longer can u believe his worry.
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - Willy_for_Boobies - 02-08-2017
sad story ...
. and as shown soo many times ..
.. to be honest against yourself and others from beginning
... could perhaps prevent tears and suffer .
hope you both will find your "right" way .. and some happiness again ;-))
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - GuyByThePond - 02-10-2017
A frenchy trying himself at writing some english poetry !
Nice !
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - Mr_Ehsan - 05-23-2017
yeah it is good
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - Fernins - 05-23-2017
Really nice, mate. Well, that's a story every man has to deal with at some point in his life
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - Cath - 05-23-2017
Keep going!
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - BoredAl - 09-18-2017
(05-23-2017, 08:30 PM)Fernins Wrote: Really nice, mate. Well, that's a story every man has to deal with at some point in his life
I haven't had to deal with that yet, thank goodness
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - PerpetuallyFrosty - 09-18-2017
too true. specially online.
RE: "Regret", or a sad post - MissCarmen - 10-30-2017
(02-08-2017, 08:03 PM)carnacien Wrote: I once had an amazing fling,Some nice lines in there,,, keep writing....
I thought we wanted the same thing .
But she let me inside her real big heart,
And while i didnt wanna see her hurt,
The words that i used to please,
proved to be a contageous disease.
All the lies i used to make us feel good,
in the end, were revealed to be rude.
So heed the warning from the story i tell,
for it can never end too well.
The knight's armor might be shiny,
But the man inside will be tiny.
And all he can say is many times sorry,
But no longer can u believe his worry.