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Is this the end? - Vrook - 10-23-2016

And there he stood;
In that first day,
When he's chosen 'bout his way;

Shy at first, with his first step;
Looking left and right for help;
Searching here and searching there,
Hoping that he won't despair.

And really soon, he realised,
What he wants, what does he thrive
And what he truly hopes to find.

Slowly, surely, his shell broke;
As his eyes from the dark awoke,
When around him, they arrived,
People, which he cared about.

But, as always, with good things,
Knowing what the future brings,
Thoughts of torment start to form,
Bringing him afar from home.

So there he found himself, apart;
From what he loved and cared and had
The only question in his mind;
"Is this the end?", or a fresh start?



RE: Is this the end? - Willy_for_Boobies - 10-23-2016

Nice ;-))
.. and every end is the beginning of some new ;-))


RE: Is this the end? - Cath - 10-23-2016

I think I could sing it!


RE: Is this the end? - Vrook - 10-23-2016

I'd be glad to hear you trying, Cath! Smile


RE: Is this the end? - IvanXLIV - 10-23-2016

Beautiful, my friend...

With such evocative words, even the most dire endings may blossom in new, brighter beginnings. Bravo!


RE: Is this the end? - _Barbie_ - 10-24-2016

Whoop!

Really well done, keep it up!


RE: Is this the end? - TayYay - 10-24-2016

I wish i could summon Jim Morrison back and let him sing this! God this is so amazing.. One can play a psychedelic song over those lyrics!


RE: Is this the end? - Vrook - 10-24-2016

Thank you very much for your words. And I didn't expect that this random thoughts on mine, would be worth as a song lyrics. Smile


RE: Is this the end? - Cath - 10-24-2016

I told you! And why didn't you take it seriously?!