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The night was dying - Drek - 07-26-2016
The night,
the blackest night,
all in tears,
rumblings and lightning,
my strength was burned...
The sky was dying,
and all forms of life with it...
The darkness,
viciously killed the light...
That night,
my heart was drowned in blood,
the aorta cracked,
arrow made of glass,
tore apart my cardiac chambers... I felt my soul leaving my body...
The night was dying,
and I with it,
grotesque and hot flames,
time was burning...
The tears were bloody,
The savior,
like a mother weeping over her sick newborn,
watching over my soul...
Leeches and bloodthirsty shadows,
desecrating my body,
juicy flesh ready to be butchered,
in trance they were waiting for my corpse,
to fall,
deep inside the earth...
The night was dying,
in my soul,
my eyes were slowly closing,
the memories evaporating...
The love was dying,
my loved one,
your soul,
was dying inside me,
with the divine infinity,
with your body,
tainted on someone's bed...
We were dying inside me,
death full of infidelity...
We were dying inside me,
death full of betrayal...
We were dying ... cold lump of love,
we were dying together inside me...
I'm dying in heaven,
convicted in eternal afterlife,
convicted in eternal hell without you...
was dying inside me,
with the divine infinity,
with your body,
tainted on someone's bed...
We were dying inside me,
death full of infidelity...
We were dying inside me,
death full of betrayal...
We were dying ... cold lump of love,
we were dying together inside me...
I'm dying in heaven,
convicted in eternal afterlife,
convicted in eternal hell without you...
RE: The night was dying - Willy_for_Boobies - 07-26-2016
Wow,
. cheerless, dark, desperate ....
.. these were my feelings as i read this.
... a good work ;-))
RE: The night was dying - Drek - 07-26-2016
(07-26-2016, 05:52 PM)Willy_for_Boobies Wrote: Wow,
. cheerless, dark, desperate ....
.. these were my feelings as i read this.
... a good work ;-))
Uh well, that's what i've written mostly and still writing, sometimes something kicks you so bad that it brings you back in time, I'm glad you like it ^^
RE: The night was dying - Cath - 07-26-2016
I like writting dark poems, but I don't really like reading them... But this time I read one... Now I feel a bit drepressed...
RE: The night was dying - Drek - 07-27-2016
(07-26-2016, 07:50 PM)Cath Wrote: I like writting dark poems, but I don't really like reading them... But this time I read one... Now I feel a bit drepressed...
feeling a bit depressed after reading one is normal i guess, if you like to write grab a beer and write one then
RE: The night was dying - Cath - 07-27-2016
Lol, but I get what you're saying.