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Ascension Part 8: Rebirth - Kyrios - 07-06-2016
With Soiryk's heart cut out his blood mingled with the rain,
From the East Anelahk approached where soldiers stood,
To see him gasp, his wounds all close and he his feet regain,
Spied from the south by Axela drawn by the scent of blood.
The dragons roared and lightning crashed round Soiryk's dancing sword,
With soldiers felled a meeting, first and most auspicious,
Axela's sway and sultry look woke Soiryk's slumbering manhood,
When Anelahk stepped through the smoke he smiled surreptitious.
Sunlight pierced the roiling clouds upon this trio judicious,
Soiryk bowed and stowed his blade declaring them well met,
Anelahk, her hand held out, asked Axela; Are you with us?
Together they set out towards the bright sunset.
The morning after they made camp Soiryk slept like a stone,
RE: Ascension Part 8: Rebirth - Cath - 07-06-2016
First! Just kidding. By the way, where did you found the names of the places and all?
RE: Ascension Part 8: Rebirth - Kyrios - 07-06-2016
Well the names of the gods are Kyrios Alexa and Khalena backwards. Most places and other names are in German but based on puns, references to the person or historical stuff.
Karl Konig is based on Charles Martel for example. We have lots and lots of references baked in, but many are kinda obscure.
RE: Ascension Part 8: Rebirth - Cath - 07-06-2016
Oh, it isn't so unusual to see that in fantasy stuff, silly me, I should have guessed it!