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Myself: I Wish That You Fool Me There - Kyrios - 07-01-2016
It's fine if you don't love me,
Its OK that you don't want me,
I just wish that you would hold me,
One last time.
Let me see that paradise you,
Let me feel in your embrace you,
Loved me once so let me hold you,
One last time.
Once more I want to be there,
Once if you want to be there,
Only in your arms, am I there,
One last time.
Veiled in my ignorance I,
Vexed you in your innocence I,
Very much desire you and want I,
One last time.
Every time I really thought that,
Each smile and kiss could mean that,
Each one held real love, I want that,
One last time.
You aren't to blame cause I'm a fool,
You never made of me a fool,
You could just let me be you're fool,
One last time.
Over and again I wish,
Of you to share your heart, I wish,
Only now you grant my wish,
One last time.
Unless I overstep myself,
Used to break my heart myself,
Undone I do submit myself,
One last time.
Just for everyone's information this is not about me, or how I feel about anyone. It's written for a friend about her feelings.
RE: Myself: I Wish That You Fool Me There - Cuylie - 07-02-2016
Even though it isn't about you, I think there are feelings in their we can all identify with. For me, the first five stanzas really hit someplace close to my heart.
RE: Myself: I Wish That You Fool Me There - Kyrios - 07-02-2016
I agree. Loss heartbreak and a longing for closure are a thread that runs through the lives of everyone I think.