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As I lay in bed - Sate - 06-13-2016
I remember this as a "funny" creative writing piece. Not mine but something I recall and had the pleasure finding. Please enjoy!
As I lay on my bed, thinking about you, I feel this strong urge to grab you and squeeze you, because I can't forget last night.
You came to me unexpectedly during the balmy and calm night, and what happened in my bed still leaves a tingling sensation in me.
You appeared from nowhere and shamelessly without any reservations,
you laid on my naked body...
you sensed my indifference, so you applied your hungry mouth to me without any guilt or humiliation,
and you drove me near crazy while you drained me.
Finally I went to sleep.
Today when I woke up, you were gone, I searched for you but to no avail, only the sheets bore
witness to last nights events.
My body still bears faint marks of your enthusiastic ravishing, making it harder to forget you. Tonight I will remain awake waiting for you.............................. .................
...................... ................ .....................
...................... ...........................
You fucking mosquito
RE: As I lay in bed - Cuylie - 06-13-2016
*giggles* The only thing it misses is the siren whine that teases at your ears, but you do not know from whence it came.
RE: As I lay in bed - Barbiesque - 06-13-2016
Haha *golf clap applause*. Yeah pesky mosquitoes, there was a meme once..something about slaps and no effects and a mosquito.
I'll just leave that there.
RE: As I lay in bed - GuyByThePond - 06-13-2016
LMAO! that's a very good one!
RE: As I lay in bed - Cath - 06-13-2016
That was really surprising! I liked that twist!
RE: As I lay in bed - Sate - 06-14-2016
*bows* Thank you. As I said, not my original thought but something I wanted to share. Glad you all enjoyed. I'll actually be sharing more things soon after this weekend and vacation is over
RE: As I lay in bed - Ghostrider65 - 09-23-2016
*laughing, holding my sides, almost peeing my pants*
Well done Sate! Thank you! Well written, had me sliding my fingers south.. till I reached the end ! Love it !!!
RE: As I lay in bed - Simple Tania - 09-23-2016
LOOOOOOOOOOL... amazing, from June and only now I noticed! I just loved that ode to mosquito, hihihihi