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Butterfly - brandon1op - 06-02-2016
Butterfly
She is a Gentle butterfly
As silent as the wing
but as beautiful as the stars
She may seem shy as a caterpillar
but when she spreads her wings and flys
She is a free spirit and goes where she please
She is a Gentle Butterfly
Dont look down on her for her size
because inside her body
is a soul that is free and a heart that will take her there
RE: Butterfly - Simple Tania - 06-02-2016
And I like this one also, very good Brandon, like I used to say Keep them c(u)mming!
RE: Butterfly - Lexirific - 06-02-2016
What's taken you so long to start posting, Brandonio?
I really like this one.
Maybe it's because I'm small, and people try to look down on me.
Maybe because I like butterflies.
Maybe because it's just really good.
RE: Butterfly - brandon1op - 06-02-2016
I have always done poetry usually small stuff like making one up off the top of my head and just basing it off someone appearence in game even this one only took me max 5 minutes to make
May be she is born eith it
MAYBE ITS MAYBELLINE
RE: Butterfly - Seiryu - 06-02-2016
Very, very nice! Your last stanza captures my imagination.
RE: Butterfly - Cuylie - 06-03-2016
I agree with Lexi; I'm also small and I can tend towards quietness; which makes people think they can push me around easily. It surprises people when I suddenly explode with exuberance. I guess this is my way of saying I liked the imagery!
RE: Butterfly - Lacivious - 06-06-2016
This makes me happy. =)